Final Final Finally Finished

final crit

Thoria -a powdery white oxide of thorium ThO₂ used especially as a catalyst and in crucibles and refractories and optical glass 

Aorist -an inflectional form of a verb typically denoting simple occurrence of an action without reference to its completeness, duration, or repetition

More than half way done

Before Monday

I only shot about 1/3 of what I wanted to shoot so my narrative has changed since my storyboard. I said from the get go that narrative was more of a guideline or skeleton and was subject to change. The piece is suppose to be more poetic than narrative anyway so I do not mind these changes from the original idea. My main concern is if the beats and clip times are lining up and make sense throughout the work. I know some people said they start to tune out, I added some light layers to try to hold interest. I am happy with where this is at and going.

spliced the soundtrack in film to shorten it a bit.

Progress

More progress on trying to make the video more interesting in the middle but not as hectic as the intro, I need some breath time the whole video can not be choppy, so I am trying to figure out a solution to keep it watable.

Class Crit

This is where I am at, I am liking what is going on but if it looks cheesy or off please let me know.